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letoatreides
Stripcreator Newbie

TAKE YOUR BEST SHOT, CRITICS! AHAHA!

It's right here!

9-24-02 6:56pm (new)
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punkrockskaboy
Defender of the Liquor Cabinet

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I read all your comics. They are alright. By the way, there is a delete function if you donate. Other than that, you are SOL

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Welcome to Bohemia. Population: a lot Cash flow: a little

9-24-02 9:45pm (new)
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letoatreides
Stripcreator Newbie

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Thanks, (SOL?) I just noticed going through them some typos and grammatical errors. I suppose I'll be donating soon then. They are my first, so I suppose I need to develop my sense of humor a bit further =)

9-24-02 10:14pm (new)
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boinky33
I'm with stupid ^

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I really enjoyed your comics.

9-25-02 5:03am (new)
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punkrockskaboy
Defender of the Liquor Cabinet

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Oh yeah, don't get me wrong. I enjoyed them, but they a couple seemed a little bland to me. And SOL means Shit Outta Luck in NY and NYC. Not sure what country/state you are from or if other states use that little bit of slang.

See, in order to make Shit Outta Luck a little less vulgar, saying SOL is a perfectly acceptable statement in public. Of course, here in the city, Asshole and Shit are common among drivers. Heh heh (not really as common as some think...it is primarily a stereotype) but we do see the occasional rumble over a parking space. Those are fun and ridiculous all at the same time. and LOTS of honking horns. I am off on a tangent. Fuck me running

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9-25-02 11:31am (new)
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letoatreides
Stripcreator Newbie

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Thanks.

I made more! Hooray! If anyone else has opinions they will be kept and treasured in a small golden chest that I keep in my room. FOREVER!

9-26-02 1:11pm (new)
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dcomposed
C3H5N3O9

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these comics are better than being ass raped by a 33 inch penis.

They're realy good.

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9-26-02 8:53pm (new)
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Spankling
Looking for love in ALL the wrong places, baby!

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[quote]these comics are better than being ass raped by a 33 inch penis.

They're realy good.[/quote]
But once you get up to 39 inches it becomes a tie.
Okay... This one is as good as 50 inches!

[Click to view comic: 'Lessons In Life']

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"Jelly-belly gigglin, dancin and a-wigglin, honey that's the way I am!" Janice the Muppet

9-26-02 9:00pm (new)
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xenotarsosaurus
Stripcreator Newbie

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I loved these. They made me want to eat all of mommy's pills. Bravo.

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Xenotarsosaurus

9-27-02 6:06pm (new)
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