This is my first comic. I apreciate feedback and constructive critisism, but please dont flame the hell outta me.

[Click to view comic: 'Everyone Hates Linux']

You know, Brad and DexX do kind of look like the Mac and PC guys.

The comic is okay.  The idea is funny, but the execution is a little flat.  The dialogue strikes me as unrealistic, and you could do more with the last panel: okay, he's in hell, but what if he cracked a joke about being in hell, or what if the demon came up with some kind of ironic torture for him?

Not a bad start, though; welcome aboard, and keep at it. 

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

I think it's Pretty good for a first. You're first is way better then my first. Just keep at it and you'll get a laughing streak in no time. I started off really bad. You seem to be a bit better with your first comic. This was my first laugh I got and I didn't understand why it was so funny:

[Click to view comic: 'Get-In-A-Bin Day']

And this is me almost 700 comics later:

[Click to view comic: 'Generations~ Inspired by Chaodwarrior']

Keep at it and you'll get a bunch of hits sooner or later.   :)

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You have my most solemn and honourbound of vows that clicking this link will not direct you to a youtube video of a rick roll

I DON'T GET THE FIRST ONE. WHAT IS IT?!?!?!

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DSP97

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www.100waystokillastickman.com ~ Blood & gore is the name of the game! (Coming soon)

You got the second one??

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You can take the heart out of the hooker but you can't take the hooker out of the heart. -- Frankenhooker

Beeko180

...were you implying that that second comic was somehow less shitty than the first one?

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

not_Scyess

...were you implying that that second comic was somehow less shitty than the first one?

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I wasn't implying that. I was implying that I originally didn't mean it to be funny. That's all.

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You have my most solemn and honourbound of vows that clicking this link will not direct you to a youtube video of a rick roll