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HisJesterness
Stripcreator Newbie

My first comic! Funny if I do say so myself.

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"Humor is like a rubber sword - it lets you make a point without drawing blood." ~Mary Hirsch

3-27-06 4:09pm (new)

Inflatable_Man stripcreator donor
Heart stopper. Hip hopper. Pill popper.

Wha--?

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I-... I-....

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Destroying my reputation one post at a time.

3-27-06 5:30pm (new)

AudaciousMoose
Junior Comic Technician

Your dialogue is patronizing to the reader. For instance "look, it's a pig!" Yes...we know it's a pig...

Try something a little more subtle.

4-02-06 8:30pm (new)

ElTigreMask2K stripcreator donor
Pink Donkey Wrangler

4-03-06 12:28am (new)

CheerUpEmoKid
Member - Tobor Fan Club

Well, I thought it was good anyways ^_^

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"Cerebral ... does that mean your heart?"

4-03-06 3:14am (new)

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