SWF SEEKS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM

EITHER THAT OR ICE CREAM CONES

(PLZ LOOK AT MY COMICS OR BUY ME ICE CREAM)

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

THX

COMMENTS ARE STILL APPRECIATED EVEN IN LIGHT OF DELICIOUS ICE CREAM

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

Dispite everything in my being urging to tell you otherwise, I thought your comics were pretty damned funny. The only suggestions I would give you is to cut out the narration boxes (which were only necessary once or twice out of the 30+ of them you used).

Normally I'd say to cut out the all-caps and add proper punctuation, but in your case I think it added a lot to your comics (TEDA-style).

Hooray for you. And you even got ice cream, too.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

HOW NICE

THANK YOU FOR YOUR INPUT. THE TEDA-STYLIN COMMENT MADE ME WIGGLE IN DELIGHT

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

Terrible.

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Mess with the best, die like the rest.

I have to agree with C0mplet0 on this one. Some of your comics were decent and slightly funny, but the others were all like a bad R rated movie. Try to use better punctuation, that might fair your comics quite a bit better. Also, the fact that it looks like your caps lock key became broken after your first comic is kind of a turn-off.

NO CAN DO SIR OR MADAM

IT IS KINDA MY SCHTICK YOU KNOW

BUT THX ANYWAY!!1 HAVE A FINE DAY LOLOLOL

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I LIKE NATURE BECAUSE THAT'S WHERE PONIES LIVE

I guess everyone does need a gimmick.