Yay! Score one for the not_Scy-ster.

That's better. Get rid of the narration in the first panel. Either your reader has read the previous comics or not. If he has, then he doesn't need to be told where he is. If he hasn't, no worries; the background of the greater plot in this particular strip doesn't matter. It can be funny without it.

Consider getting rid of the narration, and prepending the sentence "You've drowned" to the angel's 1st panel dialog -- otherwise the comic won't make sense on its own. Then, instead of having the reaper in the last panel say "! ? ? ?" or whatnot, say something that's actually witty, such as "Man, I need to cut back on the Prozac." And you might as well make the reaper the angel in that last panel; there's no reason to switch characters.

Oh, wait a minute... we've moved to the FGH forum. Well, you all suck and should be ashamed of yourselves for letting 150,000 people die, or whatever. blah blah blah. growl, piss, moan!

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

I didn't mean that and I'm sorry if that's how you took it. Just because I found one off-hand comment of your's kinda messed up and inappropriate, doesn't mean I think you're a bitch. I actually think you're a really funny stripper and an awesome person and I hope we can still be cool with each other.

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Destroying my reputation one post at a time.

Yellowstone is gonna kick ass. I'm just north of the Wyoming border so I'm gonna be RIGHT there when it happens. In less than 20 seconds after it goes I'll be reduced to ash. I can't wait!

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It's grime time.